ledgic a story as old as time

name: Ledgic

village: drifter

kekki genkai: boshugan (the ability of body control that only be used after eons of training.)

age: ageless (but looks around 20)

personality: ledgic is lazy but has a nack for fighting and is a playful fighter, her also will never get upset because of a fight. and has a happy go lucky attitude. But will get angry if anyone messes with cloak.

Approved but its abit short...and it looked like you really took your time with it...approved

In a galaxy far away there was a galaxy named by the inhabitance by the name of kulera. Kulera had a sun as small as earths moon but was a blue star and hot enough to make almost every planet in this universe a tropical forest. Imecka the largest planet of the solar system was so close to this sun it was almost barren exept one city called Byovas. Byovas is a city like no other it thrives of citizens surviving off of their leaders imports from nieboring planet Gertum. Their leader Ju Kai, Ju Kai is greedy and weak. He puts fines on everything but walking and breathing. Almost every citizen is without a house and one of these poor citizens was one named Ledgic he was a young boy at the time and living with his father on the streets. Ledgic's father Dran would check the markets every day trying to pickpocket the unweary citizens. But while his father he would always go to one store admiring the shop owners prized posession a red cloak with metal spickes on the shoulders and one on each sleeve handing by a metal chain. This he did for four months before the cloak was stolen by someone unknown. Ledgic was so depressed that when he went to his father he told him off and left for Ju Kai's palace. When he reached the front entrance he was stuck in the front by a moat filled with alligator like creatures. He threw rocks constantly for 10 days until one of the guards finily gave in. He walked in and started walking to Ju Kai's chamber but was stopped by guards. He simply said that he was a relative of Ju Kai's. The guards didn't know but were pretty convinced. He passed by and opened the chamber door to see the cloak on Ju Kai modling it off to his designer. And then they both did a double take when they saw this little boy in the chamber.
Ju Kai said "who are you and what are you doing in my chamber. Led icon didn't respond and then Ju Kai repeated "WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY CHAMBER!!!"
Ledgic replied in a calm voice "I'm Ledgic and I'm here to get that cloak back."
Ju Kai then said "why it's mine."

Not done

...still not done mr. Copy and paste?