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Kitana Yayoi
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PostSubject: Path of the assassin   Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:19 pm

The monastery was her home. The monks were her family. The morning was her skin while the night was her heart. She never knew if she had a real mother. The nurse was good enough for her. She never knew if she had a real father. The master was all she needed.

Not once had she ever set foot outside the monastery. All she ever did was train. Train in the arts of assassination, or the shinobi. She was good at what she did, in theory. No one could beat her in spars anymore, and she even brought her own master to his knees. But she was informed that they were only on limited training materials.

The real way of the shinobi was in the Hidden Villages. This is where her master told her to go. The place where she could learn to be a real kunoichi, and be the best she could be. Bidding farewell to her family, the Yayoi clan, Kitana went out into the world known as Mylania, her destiny to become the greatest ninja there is.
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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:33 pm

Nice bio. And I don't think you stated a village.

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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:42 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Tue Oct 18, 2011 11:43 pm

Cool beans lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Wed Oct 19, 2011 5:46 pm

Ok, I don't think your name should be Kitana. Not saying cuz it sux, but because of copyright reason. It's fine to use that name. And you can use Kitana's picture. But you can't use Kitana and have the picture of Kitana too. Get what I'm saying. So either change the name or change the pic.
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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:03 pm

She actually bypassed the copyright law by having a last name. Plus if they look at her abilities, they'd see that its not the same person. Lastly, this is a non-profit fansite so we aren't illegally using the characters anyway. If she said she was the Kitana from Mortal Kombat and that her best friend was Jade and she was the 'daughter' ehem, of Shao Kahn, then we might have a problem.

Just like me. I'm Kyo Kusanagi, the full name and with the heavenly flame ability. But everything else has pretty much changed.
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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:07 pm

Yea, but here's the thing. If MK looked on our site, they can still sue of just because of the name Kitana AND the pic. Doesn't matter of pic. Beside's with you, I don't think you using Kyo's pic. I don't want to take any chance of getting our site shut down.
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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:14 pm

That is Kyo's pic.
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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:20 pm

You know what though, just put a disclaimer. Artery may be right, but I've written fanfiction for years now. You can keep all your stuff, just put a disclaimer about Kitana. I need to go do the same for Kyo actually.
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PostSubject: Re: Path of the assassin   Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:26 pm

Hold on. You need to make a mastery sheet too.
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